Lincoln once talked about a childhood experience in a letter to a friend: My father had a farm in Seattle with many stones on it. Because of this, my father bought it at a lower price. One day, my mother suggested that the stones on it should be removed. Father said that if we could move out, the owner wouldn't sell it to us. They are a hill, all connected with mountains. One year, my father went to the city to buy horses, and my mother took us to work on the farm. Mother said, "Let's move these things that get in the way, shall we?" So we started digging stones. It wasn't long before I got rid of them, because they were not the hills my father imagined, but lonely stones. Just dig a foot down and you can shake them. Have you ever had a similar experience in your life? Please write an article on the topic of "Rock". Requirements: ① Independent decision; ② Style selection; 3 topic self-made; (4) Not less than 800 words. [Examination]: First, examine the topic, the topic is "Stone and Mountain", which has implications and represents difficulties and obstacles; Relationship is how not to treat "stone" as "hill". Retrial materials, for these stones that are not conducive to the farm, my father thinks that they are hills and cannot be moved; Mother thinks this is a stone and can move it. What is the reason for the difference? Father heard from hearsay, subjectively magnified the difficulties and did not try it himself; Mother saw the essence through the phenomenon, took the initiative to do, try and practice. [Idea]: Don't magnify the difficulty, do it and try to succeed. After understanding the essence through phenomena, do it. ) [Main fault]: 1, which is inaccurate. Attitude determines success or failure (hard work, confidence, courage, optimism and pessimism, etc.). ); Change thinking; Accumulation and collective strength; Simply discuss simplicity and complexity, big and small; Dare to win; Learn to doubt. 2, the expression is not allowed to be a, and the topic is not deducted. The whole article has no key words, and talking about practice is completely out of the topic. B, improper materials, the "practice" here is not afraid of immediate difficulties such as "mountains", dare to practice, discover the essence (actually "stones"), and solve problems. C. The case is inappropriate and the analysis is not in place. Celebrity (disabled) cases only talk about how characters overcome difficulties, without combining topic analysis. D, no examples, pure personal opinion, unconvincing. 3. The topic is not good. 4, the roll surface is messy and there are many typos. Learning: Everyone will encounter some obstacles, big and small, just like there are small stones and big stones on a road. We can move small stones and take a detour when we meet hills, but some people regard small stones as big and small mountains and forget the role of hands over time. (Sebrina,/Kloc-Class 0/9, "The Harvest is Trying") The same stone, Lincoln's father thinks, is a hill that can't be dug; Lincoln's mother proved by action that this "mountain" is just a stone. Like many people in life, Lincoln's father "saw" the mountains with a magnifying glass, not trying or exploring, but his mother broke through the illusion and finally successfully moved them away. (19 class Jiang "take the magnifying glass and let's go!" ) See how he interprets the topic. If a stone is as thick as a hill, then this stone is really unshakable; If people fly into the sky as wishful thinking, then there will never be any hope for humans to fly into space. Don’t make a mountain out of a molehill. When you really do it, you will find that it is not as difficult as you think. (18 class Xiaoxin "Don't make a mountain out of a molehill")