Read the following text and write as required.
Many adults sigh that they are too tired to live, and even say, "Oh, I'm exhausted!" "Many senior three students say, what are you? We are the most tired people in China! Some students say they are physically tired, some students say they are mentally tired, and some students say they are both. Then why do people live so tired Is it worth it? How on earth should we treat fatigue?
Please write an argumentative essay on the topic of "thinking fatigue". The topic is self-made and the mind is self-determined, not less than 800 words.
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Poor examination of the questions, not focusing on "thinking", writing "suffering" and "pain" means refusing to write "tired" or being biased and inconsistent;
Still in vitro, written as a narrative;
One extreme, many phenomena, too much narration and too little analysis, old example. Finally, they downplay, rush to conclusions, point a little, can't write the true feelings, or write nonsense, without combining their own reality;
At the other extreme, it is empty talk, lacking real, concrete, vivid and touching materials;
According to the meaning of the material, the article is perfunctory and has no obvious center: first, why people live so tired, second, whether it is worth it, and third, how to treat fatigue;
Imitate the sentence, "People are tired ..." "Tired can be tired, very tired ..."
Language lacks aura, and literary talent is gone;
Writing is not a small problem, it is a headache. Many students deduct points because of it. There are obvious buttons and hidden buttons. The key is "kickback" (the overall effect of the paper is not good, which seriously affects the overall impression)!
Example of excellent composition
You are not tired if you have a goal.
Michelle Chen
Dogs that want to eat bones will never stop jumping and biting, even if you hang the bones high.
Sunflowers that want sunshine will never feel tired even if they hold their heads high.
If a dying man in the desert knows that there is water ahead, he will try his best to climb up-tired? He doesn't think at all.
Because they all have goals. Are you still tired when you want to achieve the joy after your goal? Of course not.
Some people say that they are tired because they are at a loss and don't know where to go, and others can't help you. So they run around like lost lambs, and gradually they are involuntarily exhausted, and they begin to sigh that they are too tired to live. Actually, I'm not looking in the right direction.
Edison still didn't give up after repeated failures, and he still didn't cry tired. Because he has a constant goal in mind-that is to find the best way to solve the problem. When he faced failure, he said to the people around him, "at least I know another road that won't work." I have gained experience, how can I do it for nothing! " It is this spirit and the pursuit of goals that kept Edison on the road of science until he was 80 years old.
The most common complaint of senior three students is fatigue. Yes, they sleep less than seven hours a day. Except for eating and sleeping, all they see are numbers, letters and symbols. To put it another way, we still have a lot to do-surpass. Even if you are the first in your grade, there are still classmates from all over the province and even the whole country running against you. If you think more about the flowers and applause at the destination, you may abandon the idea of "tired".
I'm afraid Sima Qian is the most qualified to say that he is tired. For him, this is not physical fatigue, but mental fatigue with shame. But he doesn't feel tired either. He was attached to the masterpiece Historical Records, endured the pain caused by castration, and completed this "swan song of historians". If this is not the goal in his mind, what brings him courage and motivation?
Whether you are tired or not is only between people's thoughts, and that thought is whether you have worked hard in your heart. Whether to be a mediocre person or a person who has a dream and strives for it determines whether a person is tired or not in this life.
Learn from puppies and find your own flesh and blood; Learn from sunflowers and find the sunshine you want; A ship that learns to sail will always sail for the lighthouse. Trust me, you won't feel tired.
Tired thinking
Yuan
2 1 century today, China is in the stage of steady development of socialism. All over the country, men, women and children, laid-off workers from government agencies and enterprises, etc., are working hard to build the motherland and keep up with the times. Who is not tired? Who dares not to be tired?
Today's fatigue is to stop crying tomorrow. As Liu Yong said, "A sip of tea can't be bitter for a lifetime, but it will always be bitter for a while." I have been traveling all over the world all my life, but I will always be tired for a long time.
The great playwright Bernard Shaw didn't put on his first play until he was 90 years old. Who knows if he is tired of tears? After 90 years of hard work, he finally succeeded.
Deng Xiaoping experienced three ups and downs, and it has been more than 70 years since he entered the political arena for the third time. What made him work hard for 70 years and still not let go? It is his fearless heart and his heart of serving the people.
Chen Jingrun, a great mathematician in China, broke Goldbach's conjecture in a simple bungalow of 10 square meter for ten years. There are dozens of sacks on the draft paper alone.
They are all representatives who have been "tired" for a long time. They are also mentally exhausted, physically exhausted or both. However, fatigue did not defeat them and made them achieve such excellent results.
So, what makes them have the courage to fight "tired"?
It is their lofty ideals that lead them forward, rather than being "tired" to catch up with the pace of progress.
Kuafu's ideal is light. Even if he walked a long way and struggled for a long time, no matter how tired he was, he could not stop his pursuit of light. Therefore, his tiredness brought him eternal glory with the sun and the moon!
The ideal of Xiaoxi is a vast ocean, so even if it is tortuous and thrilling, even if it is full of twists and turns, no matter how tired it is, it can't stop his pursuit of vastness. Therefore, his tiredness won him the vastness after being integrated into the sea.
Man's ideal is civilization, so he is not stagnant, eating grass and drinking blood, but approaching civilization step by step. Thousands of years of trekking, even if the wind and rain are urgent, even if the thunder and lightning are mixed, even if it is tired, it will not stop him from moving towards civilization.
The ideal of senior three students is to be admitted to university. No matter how tired and bitter they are, they will never bow to Kuafu, admit defeat to the brook or to their ancestors. No matter how tired they are, we will continue to struggle. This is nothing compared with Bernard Shaw, Deng Xiaoping and Chen Jingrun who have been tired for decades.
We can't reach the dawn unless we go through the darkness.
What's so terrible about being tired? Think about the coming gorgeous dawn! ! !
Physical fatigue is nothing more than mental fatigue.
a surname
You like eating what you like, but you don't like what you don't like. The reason is simple, because you like it, it tastes good. The same is true of feeling tired or not. Do what you like, it's hard to feel tired anyway. Doing something you don't want to do may make you feel tired at first. Such "tiredness" means "physical tiredness" caused by "mental tiredness".
For example, if you wash dishes and mop the floor and clean the windows at home, although things are trivial, you will feel exhausted when you are busy, but if you go out to see the scenery with friends and relatives, climb mountains and row boats for a while, your legs will not have a chance to be idle. Although tired, I am still eager to move forward, and I have to boast that I am faster than others. So it's okay to say that you are physically tired, but it's your mental fatigue that determines your attitude.
Being tired is a terrible thing. People often say: "Interest is a person's best teacher." And what I want to say is "mental fatigue is the most powerful enemy of people." The reason is also very simple-how can a person do a good job if he can't get into what he wants to do and his heart is full of distractions? Some students are tired of learning and regard learning as a chore. I'm tired in class, and I'm tired of going home to do my homework at night. But as soon as the bell rings, they feel refreshed. This is because they are tired, and such people can't learn well even if they are smart. So a tired heart is the most terrible opponent!
How can we keep a heart that is not tired?
For life, we should understand a truth: "We should get rid of those who suffer, but enjoy ourselves". Life is often full of fun, but people are often trapped by things and served by forms. They don't know how to wash away the dust of the soul and let the beauty and happiness remain, so they feel tired. For example, there used to be a nanny who was lazy and didn't mop the floor for several days. She cooked several bowls of food like everything, and lay on the sofa watching TV all day, lamenting that she was "tired of living". Later, I changed to another one. I was busy all day, cleaning and washing quilt pillowcases, but I didn't say I was tired. It turns out that she often goes out to bask in the sun or plays badminton with her neighbor's nanny, and laughs every day. We can also have fun from things around us, such as watching flowers bloom and fall, enjoying the clouds and the wind, and listening to beautiful music.
In learning, we should regard progress as a pleasure. When you are depressed, think about what is worse than us, and you will feel less depressed. When you are proud, think about what is stronger than us and you will be humble. If you are not discouraged and arrogant, your heart will not be tired.
So, let's keep a tireless heart, and even the most difficult things will be solved. If the heart is not tired, the body will never be tired!
Foreign class composition
Tired of China.
Li Si Ban Yang Cangye
The word tired is really well-coined, which can be described as both form and spirit. A font under heavy pressure, a pronunciation that feels like vomiting three minutes. Everyone shouted tired, who is the most tired, you have your tired, he has his tired, anyway, just one word-tired.
Now the world is like this, small earth, so many people come out, do you still want to be tired? Some people want to be tired and have no chance! Who told us that the human population density is relatively high, who told us that the resources on this earth are "poor", and who told us that you were born in China? Come on, accept your fate. Who doesn't rack their brains for mental work and who doesn't work hard for manual work, how can they live without fatigue? Fortunately, China has a complete "Youth Training Plan", which can help China people adapt to the tired social requirements in the future. From primary school, you have to carry a schoolbag that is not much different from your own weight and do a "turn-back run" at least twice a day and at most four times. If necessary, you can increase your exercise. When you can enter middle school without hunching over, it shows that you have developed a good body like steel. Middle schools pay more attention to psychological and vision training, with eight classes a day, which is the basic requirement. It is a "reasonable" schedule to get up earlier than the chicken and go to bed later than the cat. Do 180 questions every day, which is the minimum guarantee for study and life. Doing papers is faster than printing, so as to keep up with the learning progress. When you can enter the university with sound limbs and black hair and no more than three figures, you have to thank your physical training in primary school. Entering a university, even if you enter a professional group, you need to face social competition in many aspects, such as study, employment and feelings. Tired? Can this not be tiring? China has a population of 654.38+300 million. Think about how many opportunities are left for you. Tired is tired.
How many people in China are so tired? They have to look after their homes and protect their homes. After eating this meal, think about the next meal; After today, I look forward to next year. Year after year, day after day, fatigue will accumulate day after day. In this social reality, it is impossible to tell the truth if you want to be tired. Everyone is alive, people have feelings, and people have responsibilities. Unless you can reach for your clothes, eat with your mouth open, be detached from the world and wander between heaven and earth, you must bear the suffering that a mortal has to bear.
Is it really impossible to get rid of this kind of fatigue? Not really, because we are very tired, so we have sports, games, and yearning for nature and beautiful things. See the first sunshine in the waves, breathe the first air in the morning, enjoy the first flower in early spring, and bid farewell to the last sunset on the river. Learn to laugh, learn to be tolerant and learn to be the legendary swordsman. You will find it easy not to be tired. Let's go to see the sea.
weary
No.302, Yao Yao, Ban Long
The word "tired", a "field" and a "department", jokes that people are tied in the field, aren't they tired?
Of course, in developed cities and modern times, people are not tired of farming, but they can't get rid of the fate of other things.
People make fun of donkeys. The donkey was tied to the mill, day and night, round and round until it was exhausted. But many times, people seem to be inferior to donkeys. Imagine that an official is afraid of the power in his hand, a student stays up all night for exam scores, and a businessman is racking his brains for petty profits. The donkey's mill is installed by people, and the man's mill is installed by himself.
People are vulgar after all, and they can't get rid of fame and fortune and secular desires when they die. In other words, people can't escape the fate of fatigue when they die.
Where's the saint? Is the saint tired?
Tao Yuanming saw through the officialdom and retired to the countryside. Isn't it necessary to work between long acres? Li Bai is wandering around in Wan Ren, but doesn't he also lament the difficulty of Shu Dao?
Even the saints are tired.
If people are not tired of this, they will be tired of that. When you embark on life, you must not turn back. Carrying a goal, even if you are physically and mentally exhausted and get nothing, you can only spare no effort, just like "chicken ribs", which are tasteless to eat and a pity to abandon.
However, people who have "chicken ribs" to be tired are all happy. If you want to be tired, you must do nothing. What about inaction?
Four bodies are not diligent, regardless of grain, and people have always spurned them. Liu Adou is doing nothing, and he is still happy to be banned from other places; Li Houzhu's inaction can only be empty talk about the collapse of mountains and rivers. Worry and fatigue can rejuvenate the country, and leisure can die. This is an old saying and a warning.
Nothing can be done without fatigue. When you are tired, life begins. Kong Ming went out of Qishan six times and captured Meng Huo seven times. He was too tired to feel at ease and died without regret. Duke Zhou vomited and ate it, and the world turned to the heart, suffering for the world, the country and the righteousness. Although tired, it is not a pleasure!
Therefore, fatigue is about the heart.
People who are obsessed with petty profits and short-sighted must be very tired all day long and do nothing all day long.
Those who are upright in heart and aim high will do their best until they die.
If you are tired and care about your heart, lift a cup of tea, taste a pot of wine, have a quiet heart, and have no scruples. Life will be suddenly enlightened. Why bother?
Donkeys are tired of grinding, and they are not stupid.
People are world-weary, and people are not confused. People have to do something, and they will be tired after doing something.
Say "tired"
Wuli banzhang temple
When the word "tired" is mentioned, people will be overwhelmed by a boulder.
Some people say that fatigue is sweating like rain, "weeding is noon"; Some people say that fatigue is the feeling of racking one's brains and thinking hard. Some people even say that the fatigue of the world is the so-called "strategy"-the battle between waves and clouds, "each holds its own terrain and intrigues." Senior three, we are really "sleepy" students, with "dark circles" fighting day and night ... It's really hard to list all kinds of "tired" situations. However, almost everyone can't avoid an embarrassing fact, that is, the word "tired" runs through life.
From the fatigue of entering a higher school in youth to the fatigue of work in youth, from the fatigue of career and family in middle age to the fatigue of emptiness and loneliness in old age. Life seems to be "tired", becoming dull, and youth has faded.
But there is such a sentence, simple but broke the mystery of "tired" in life: "I am very tired, but I feel very happy!"
Perhaps the fatigue after fatigue magnifies the warmth and comfort of the bed; It is fatigue that deepens the coolness and sweetness of a glass of water (or clear spring); It is fatigue that increases the happiness and dizziness of standing on the podium. However, happiness and gratitude are the things that are most easily consumed and annihilated by daily life. As a result, "tired" is fixed in memory forever, but the beautiful feeling that comes with it disappears in the wind.
Looking back on my short years, despite the great pressure of entering a higher school, I still have the freedom and leisure to listen to music, read books and drink tea. Although there are contradictions and misunderstandings between people, there are only a handful of friends who can share their worries. Along the way, "fatigue" runs through all the way, but "happiness" is the real background and theme, even with tears and pain.
On the other hand, many experts are tired. Lu Xun's unique detachment and greatness are achieved through repeated torture and thinking about his own soul and nation-state. Van Gogh painted crazily in poverty until he was too tired to get down, and still expressed his desire and love for art in his brother's letters; Nietzsche, who thinks day and night, has tasted the happiness of thought and unparalleled happiness in Tired, although he is only a lonely madman in the eyes of others. Tired, great and immortal.
On his deathbed, musician Ma Sicong repeatedly listened to Beethoven's Symphony of Destiny and said with tears, "What a wonderful world!" I think it should express the human voice.
Although tired and bitter, I still have to go on. Because the essence of life is still beautiful.
Tired, not tired
Text 1 class Yu Jiejing
At the foot of the mountain, Sisyphus pushed the rolling stones up the mountain again and again, and thick cocoons grew under his feet, bleeding. How many times is this? Is he tired from repeated exercise? Has he been tired all his life for one purpose?
On the land, a few small ants are walking slowly. They carried the body of a big ant. This may be their relatives. They tried their best to move the big ant, but after a few minutes, they walked a little distance. Are they tired?
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Sisyphus, but this is his fate, this is the only purpose of his life, so it's worth it to be tired again.
The little ants are tired, too, but they are out.
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