● Articles that are scribbled at will, disorganized, wearing boots and hats, confused in the middle, mediocre in thought, poor in language and not carefully written should not exceed 45 points in principle.
●? Anyone who talks about the "first step" in general, has no new ideas, analysis or significance, and has average writing ability can't exceed 42 points at most. Or write a simple "first time", which fails to show the deep meaning of "first time", and the highest score cannot exceed 45 points.
●? All simple deductive hints are correct nonsense, and the language expression is average, with a maximum score of no more than 42 points.
1. Basic principles
Grading must adhere to the unity of content and form, emphasizing the basic ability of writing, especially conception, language and style. Meeting the stylistic requirements means meeting the stylistic requirements chosen by candidates.
Grading must proceed from the reality of candidates' writing, be fair and just, grade by grade, and ensure a certain degree of discrimination.
2. Job and grade description
See the assignments and report forms below.
3. Stylistic writing skills
Argumentative writing
①? Can deduct the connotation, make personalized interpretation, unique and profound understanding, unified views and materials and thorough analysis. The argument is hierarchical and the language expression is logical; Or you can cut in from a unique angle and conduct in-depth analysis and argumentation at different levels. The language is wise, humorous and sharp, which can be regarded as a kind of paper homework. Excellent ones can be given full marks.
(2) Being able to put forward a meaningful central point in the "first step", and be able to demonstrate the central point, with appropriate examples, demonstrate and analyze the argument, and comprehensively use the argumentation method, with clear hierarchy, accurate language and rich generalization, which can be regarded as a second-class paper assignment.
(3) Being able to grasp several viewpoints or one of the viewpoints about the "first step" in the prompt, analyze and demonstrate, and write a regular argumentative paper, but there are no obvious highlights, which can be regarded as three types of volumes.
Although the viewpoint is correct, there are obvious weaknesses in the basic skills of argumentative writing, such as the internal connection between the viewpoint and the material is not close, only listing without logical analysis; In other words, although it is a normative argumentative paper, the views of the article are only platitudes or the argument materials are not new, which can be regarded as four types of volumes.
⑤ Formally, it is an argumentative paper about the "first step", but it can be regarded as five types of volumes with no central point of view, unclear point of view or lack of argumentation.
⑥ Articles with shallow understanding, mediocre thinking, poor language, chaotic structure, random combination and irregular articles can be regarded as six types of volumes.
Narrative writing
(1) The article describes one's own experience or process from a small and ingenious point of view, and then leads to one's own experience or sentiment. Moreover, the thinking is exquisite and the language meaning is rich, so it can be scored according to one type of paper, and the excellent one can be given full marks.
②? The article takes The First Step as the main body, with vivid story and proper narration, but the main idea is to express the author's experience or feelings about life or society, which can be divided into two volumes.
(3) The main body of the article tells the story related to the "first step", which has a certain plot, and the feeling caused by it is only the repetition of relevant sentences in the prompt, and there is no obvious new idea and general language expression, so it can be scored according to three types of volumes.
④? There are stories but no attraction, narratives and descriptions but no clever pen, no new ideas in conception and theme, dull language as a whole and no obvious characteristics in expression, which can be divided into four types of volumes.
⑤ The plot of the story written is obviously "tagged", and the experience or sentiment caused by it is far from the "first step", and there are obvious defects in language expression, which can be scored according to five types of volumes.
⑥ The story plot is obviously juvenile, the language expression is vulgar, the preface is inconsistent, and the main body of the article is unknown, which can be divided into six categories.
4. Case handling
(1) If plagiarism is confirmed, two thirds of the contents are the same, with no more than 20 points; The content is basically the same, with no more than 10.
(2) Written poems should be submitted to the marking team leader.
(3) The unfinished article does not exceed 46 points, less than 100 words, 0-5 points; About 200 words, 6- 10 points; About 300 words 1 1-20 points; About 400 words, 2 1-30 points; About 500 words, 3 1-40 points; About 600 words, 4 1-46 points. If the number of words is insufficient after writing the article, the number of words will be deducted after the normal score is given. If the number of words is less than 50 words, deduct 1 point until 3 points are deducted. Unfinished articles are no longer deducted from the number of words.
Game test, dance academy, vulgar language, low-style "test paper", the highest score is no more than 40 points; All thoughts and feelings are vulgar, even if the article is to the point, the highest score of the article cannot exceed 25 points, and the highest score of vulgar content cannot exceed 13 points.
(5) Deduct points for the number of volumes and typos, and deduct 1 point for each typo until 5 points are deducted; 1 point is the difference of roller surface.
Attached to the composition classification and distribution table:
The Chinese volume I 70-63 is ingenious, novel, profound, inspiring, fresh and rich in materials, full of images and touching. Exquisite and rigorous words are vivid, sentence patterns are flexible and sentences are meaningful. The second-class volumes 62-56 are well-conceived and accurate; Appropriate material selection; The structure is complete and accurate; Third-class volumes 55-49 are general; This concept is correct; The structure is basically complete and smooth; Level 4 volumes 48-42 are basically smooth; The fifth volume 4 1-28 is young in conception; The concept is biased; The materials and viewpoints are obviously inconsistent with the structure; Obviously, the structure is chaotic and not smooth.
Grading adheres to the unity of content and form. First, we make a comprehensive evaluation from the aspects of conception, material selection, structural layout, language expression, etc., and then determine its general categories, and then float up and down according to the different characteristics of the article details.
It is a volume with accurate association, good language expression and outstanding material selection and structural ideas.
In line with the meaning of the question, the language expression is better, and one of the other three aspects is more prominent, which is the second-class volume.
In line with the meaning of the question, the concept is correct, the language is smooth and plain, and the structure is basically complete, which is three types of volumes.
The conception and conception are basically similar to those of the three types of volumes, but the language is basically smooth or general, with no new ideas and implications, and the language expression is general, which is four types of volumes.
Although it basically conforms to the meaning of the question, the other three aspects are obviously weak, which are five types of volumes.
The comprehensive evaluation is relatively poor in four aspects, or items ① and ④ in the grading rules "handling cases", or worn boots and hats, or starting from scratch, which has nothing to do with the theme, all belong to six types of volumes.
Example 1 step 1
anonymous
The waterfall runs down from the cliff, like a glittering bead curtain. The thunderous sound shakes the whole mountain, and people all sigh with admiration. However, someone climbed to the top of the cliff, only to find that it was just a gentle stream, so ordinary that it gathered into a spring bit by bit along the way. If it doesn't take that first step and rush down the cliff, it can only flow silently in the mountain stream and become an ordinary river.
"A good beginning is half the battle" is true. As long as you take the first step bravely, success is just around the corner.
Just like a swift horse, his speed depends not on his later training, but on his first step when he was born. There is such a "cruel" mother: when the pony was born, it was like a wooden stick fished out of a puddle, vigorously supporting its forelimbs and trying to stand up, but it soon fell down. Stand up, fall, stand up again, again and again. At this time, the mare came forward and blew on the wet pony with her nose, as if to encourage, and as if to say: try again, on your own. The pony smelled her mother, worked harder and propped up her hind legs. Four legs spread apart and fell heavily. Repeatedly, the pony finally stopped, took a few steps to his mother, and then fell down. When the mare saw the foal coming towards him, she didn't say hello to him, but took a step back. When the foal approached, it took a step back. The foal fell and took a step forward, but it didn't help. Someone saw the mare tossing the foal like this, deliberately making such a young life suffer, and wanted to help him, but the horse keeper stopped him and said, "This gang is broken." Cover the sky with one hand, this horse will never be a good horse! At most, it is a' disabled' horse with sound limbs. "The name of this story is" The best help is not help ". It is so profound and intriguing.
I grew up in my parents' greenhouse. I haven't experienced any storms. My parents have prepared everything for me, so I haven't taken many first steps, because I am afraid of failure and I am afraid of not doing well. But it's different now. "True Hero" doesn't sing: "How can you see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain? No one can succeed casually ... "If you fall there, you will never get up. How can you succeed without failure? Why do some people fail and some people succeed? This is a choice. Those who dare to take the first step will often succeed. The key is this first step. Leap, there will be failures and setbacks, but after the storm, it is the joy of success; You will never fail without crossing, but you will never understand the true meaning of success.
Indeed, I also want to take the first step in my life and become a pillar of the country. Success? Failure? Hehe, I don't care anymore, because all this is in my own hands. I choose success and take the first step in my life.
Comment on this article closely follows the meaning of the topic and expresses the theme of "As long as you take that first step bravely, success is just around the corner". At the beginning, I wrote from the waterfall with bi xing technique, bravely took the first step and showed an extraordinary experience. Tell a story in the middle, highlight the importance of "the first step in life", then contact yourself, reflect on your living environment, and express the wish that "I want to take the first step in life". Generally speaking, the context is clear and distinct. Apart from a few typos, the language is fluent and even has some bright spots. The shortcoming is that there is no natural transition between paragraphs, and the story is trivial and plain. Connecting with your own content only expresses a wish, which can't fully confirm the main idea of this article. To sum up, this paper can be rated as three types of volumes.
Example 2 Step 1
anonymous
The breeze blew my young dream, and I woke up from a deep sleep, looking forward to this spring that belongs to me.
I am just a humble dandelion in the grass. Because of my mother's "nothing grows" and "three wisps of spring scenery", I have gained my life. It seems it's my turn to fly, but I hesitated: should I take this step?
Tightening the open dance skirt, I sighed at the blue sky: I will leave my mother when I fly, and the future is as white as white paper, and all brushes should be decorated by myself. Thinking about it, I felt that the hero of "I left my food bar and cup, I couldn't eat or drink, and I drew my sword and looked back at my heart at a loss" and shook his head helplessly. I want to continue my spring dream.
There is a dewdrop on the mother's blade. I blinked at it, bored. I don't know where I got the courage. It smiled at me, danced a beautiful waltz and flew out gently. "pa!" On the other leaf, the water splashed suddenly, and due to the refraction of sunlight, a dazzling "disorderly flowers gradually became charming eyes" appeared. It gradually disappeared, but it gave me a shock, and I almost went to find Muna.
This is the first step? With colorful fantasy, plug in ethereal wings, go beyond the limit of life and create your own miracle! I am really excited and full of courage. The breeze passed by humming a tune and gave me inexplicable encouragement and support.
But, at the same time, neither do I.