As the name implies, evaluation is to judge right and wrong, authenticity, beauty and ugliness; Theory is discussion and reasoning; Comment is to judge and discuss the phenomena and problems in social life. Social life is rich and colorful, and social phenomena are diverse and complicated. In the process of contact with society, students will inevitably be touched, and will put forward their own views on certain social problems or phenomena, and write these views into articles, which is the social life review.
There are many kinds of comments, such as current affairs comments, ideological comments, economic comments and literary comments. Social life criticism cannot be juxtaposed with it, only a writing scope is determined. It is also different from the social life essays in the fifth volume, so it is not as academic as essays. This kind of comment can be a big article of several thousand words or a small article of several hundred words. Some essays, essays and ramblings can also fall into this category. It is aimed at people's thinking, style and understanding, or praise or belittle, to guide people's behavior, with the characteristics of fast aging, strong pertinence and strong persuasion.
Commenting on social life phenomena should be true and concrete. We must draw a conclusion on the basis of concrete analysis of materials to avoid generalizing. Pay attention to the following two points when writing:
First, actively pay attention to and participate in social life and have a sense of social responsibility.
Writing social life reviews is not for writing, but for being useful to society. Social life has positive aspects, such as helping others and being brave; There are also negative aspects, such as unhealthy tendencies and feudal superstitions. Students should observe and think more, and be conscientious in life. In particular, the liberal arts students in senior three who are about to graduate should keep a fresh and keen sense of the world around them and make clear their responsibilities to society, whether they are going for further study or going to work. Be good at finding and asking questions creatively. A news report, a sports competition, and a scientific and technological invention may all inspire writing. Many times, it is often more important to stimulate the desire and motivation of writing from life and brew the emotions and feelings of writing than to simply understand some writing skills. This is the basis of writing a good editorial. On this basis, it is mainly to select the object of comment, establish the topic, and use the selection angle and the method of refining the argument learned in the previous volumes.
Second, the structure is rigorous and the evaluation method is skillfully used.
Social life criticism belongs to argumentative writing, so the conventional method of argumentative writing is still applicable. For example, the structured way of asking questions-analyzing problems-solving problems; Argumentation methods such as putting facts, reasoning, positive and negative contrast, metaphorical reasoning and dialectical reasoning can all be used flexibly. The second example adopts the concept of "looking forward and looking back". Through historical review, we can open our minds, drift from reality to the Yangtze River, and connect it with many things in history, such as climbing mountains and visiting mountains, and sum up the spirit of the Chinese nation that runs through it.
The common mistakes in students' writing and comments are generally practical, just asking questions, enumerating phenomena, without analysis, often opinions+arguments, and lack of reasoning process between arguments; Or one-sided, biased understanding, often from point to area, from partiality to generalization, absoluteness and extremism, without grasping the discretion of comments. These are all things that need to be overcome.
Example 1
Always thinking about others
Shuxiang Lv
Civilization and politeness month has begun again. I want to talk about some little things that are not noticed in daily life. Although things are small, they can see big things.
If you go for a walk in the park on a summer morning, sometimes you will be surprised to hear a loud shout behind you. It turns out that this comrade is shouting while walking. Go a little further, and you will meet someone singing in the pavilion, usually accompanied by the huqin, and sometimes there are drums. It is supposed that the park should be quiet, and everyone should find another place to sing and shout. This reminds people of the "unprecedented" period of the "tweeter", telling people outside the city to hide in the city and people in the city to hide outside the city. Fortunately, this is a thing of the past. However, the situation that factories or schools use loudspeakers to do broadcasting exercises or hold meetings, thus disturbing neighbors has not disappeared. As for talking in the office, beating children and scolding women in the dormitory makes people around you fidgety, even more so every day. Others walked out of the room and closed the door conveniently, playing ball on a swing. They gave up before the door closed, and the people in the room were startled with a bang.
All this is because I have only myself in my mind and no one else. Everything mentioned above is related to sound. Let's talk about something other than sound. I mentioned closing the door just now. There is a spring door outside the general's door. Someone pushed open the spring door and gave up. Those who walk behind him can only admit that they are unlucky. There are many threats when walking. For example, in front of the grocery store or near the bus stop, you can often see banana peels all over the floor. For example, walking on the sidewalk, there are three or five people in front, strolling and joking, and you can only follow them. As for playing small football in the alley and badminton at the crossroads, it is also common.
Things that have nothing to do with walking, regardless of age. For example, if you have an appointment with someone, you will be five minutes late and think, "I would rather wait for him than wait for him." For example, write a letter to someone, write many words that only you know, and let others guess this and that. For example, when handing knives and scissors to others, you hold the handle yourself and point the knife at each other. There are many small things like this.
Some people say that if you want to be polite, you must grasp the big things, and these small things are not worth caring about. I said otherwise. The ideological basis of big things and small things is one. Do you only think of yourself, others or others first? Always think of others, form a good habit, always think of others in life, and naturally think of others in work-for customers, users, people who write letters and visit, comrades who work together, and people who should serve them. It is said that people who don't think of others in their daily lives will never forget to "serve the people" in their work. I dare not say that this will never happen, but I will say, "I'm afraid not!" "
This article is rich in examples, lively and convincing.
The article said: "Although things are small, we can see the big picture from the small." From what aspects does the author demonstrate this problem?
The full text is only 1000 words, with more than a dozen examples. Think about how the author handles the material.