Keywords: pay attention to social reality, pay attention to self-growth, and use materials correctly
First, the conception article
Writing test has always been something that students are afraid to do. Once off topic, no matter how good the literary talent is, it is difficult to recover the defeat, especially the argumentative essay. Therefore, it is necessary to master the characteristics of argumentative topics. Judging from the college entrance examination questions in recent years, no matter how the questions change, there are two main laws: timeliness and humanity. Moreover, questioners often put their ideas within the reach of high school students, without leaving the two principles of observing candidates' understanding of society and paying attention to self-growth. Therefore, the examination of argumentative writing might as well start from these two aspects, read the topic carefully, and make your composition steady and steady.
(A) to learn to think about the social reality reflected by the topic, clear tendency.
Example 1
"Crossing" means crossing time and space. For the film and television works with the theme of time travel, there are comments on the internet: it is also a time travel drama. The United States always wears forward, and China always wears backward. One can't think of history and the other can't think of the future.
Please write an article of not less than 800 words according to your thoughts and associations.
Requirements: ① Independent decision; 2 self-made titles; (3) Except poetry, the style is not limited; (4) distinctive stylistic features.
The comment post is biased: against China's practice of always wearing it backwards. It may be understandable that the progress of the United States is a progressive force; China's backwardness is a phenomenon of gnawing at the old, a consciousness of living in the past without making progress, and a playful and irresponsible practice. Some students wrote in their composition, "Since the TV series" Palace "was broadcast on Hunan Satellite TV, many writers and directors have flocked to the theme of" crossing ". This is the social background of the problem; " So that older people are afraid to watch TV now-for fear of not understanding it, they think they are crazy; Parents of children are not allowed to watch TV-they are afraid of leaving a wrong impression and not learning history well in the future. If a nation becomes keen on its own history, it means that there will inevitably be economic and political decline. Adams, an American sociologist, once said that considering the current situation in China, this is not an alarmist. This is exactly what needs to be analyzed and discussed in combination with social phenomena. If we can see this, we won't be stuck in the mud of talking about crossing the plot festival.
(2) Learn to see the humanistic care of the topic and pay attention to your inner growth.
Example 2
Write an article on the topic "A letter to me at the age of 30".
This is a seemingly simple but actually profound proposition. To read the composition topic, we should understand the humanistic care of the proposer-why should we face ourselves at the age of 30?
The first is the long-standing lack of subject. Too many students are used to looking for chapters and sentences in materials, shuttling through history, breathing stale breath, and racing over others' heads, but rarely can they calm down, face themselves, plan their future and safeguard their hearts. Second, there are problems in today's society. Can inexperienced students be immune to it? Society's quick success and instant benefit, impetuous flying, vanity and selfishness, money worship and kitsch, and lack of ideals and beliefs will inevitably infect students' hearts, pollute their souls and change their behavior patterns.
Of course, the proponent hopes that young students can have a persistence; Dare to face yourself and face everything with a critical, constructive and redemptive consciousness; Rational, knowledgeable, open-minded and ambitious; You can not complain, scold, be pessimistic or despair; We can not follow the crowd, go with the flow, be the beat generation and be the backbone of the nation.
If we can see the humanistic concern in the topic, students' compositions will not show their inner narrowness and superficiality because they are full of criticizing society or pursuing self-interest that makes the marking teacher frown.
(3) Summary
Reading the composition topic and exploring the social phenomenon behind the topic and the humanistic care of the questioner will not easily lead to deviation in conception. 20 1 1 for the college entrance examination, the composition questions of all localities can be grasped from these two aspects. For example, the essay title "The most honest master" in the national volume clearly points to the lottery business in full swing today. The "honesty" in the title leads candidates to think about various dishonest phenomena in society and calls for and advocates the increasingly lost "honesty". The essay title "The Rise of China" in the national curriculum standard test paper not only shows the affirmation and praise of China's political and economic development and international influence, but also reflects on the current economic and moral problems in China society from a negative perspective. Shandong's essay title "The World Needs You" needs to clarify the meaning and orientation of "the world" and "you". The "world" needs candidates to pay attention to society, their own side and themselves; "You" can be a group or a feeling, personality and spirit. The essay title of Jiangsu Volume is "Rejecting Mediocrity", which aims to guide candidates to understand all kinds of low-level aesthetic tastes and vulgar value orientations in the current society, and to warn candidates to pursue creation, development and progress, which fully reflects the concern and humanistic care of the questioner for social phenomena.
In fact, if we can calm down and analyze the topic, we can find these two trends in the composition topic. Although the topics are different, the inner spirit is similar. Don't think the composition questions of the college entrance examination are mysterious. As long as candidates can take a long view and pay attention to their inner growth, they will not be helpless before the college entrance examination composition questions.
Second, the material article.
I bought one book after another, but my composition score did not improve with the increase of the thickness of the material book. Improper selection of materials in the composition, patchwork of words and three non-analysis. Students are superficial in the rhetoric of others, lamenting the changes in the complex world. For example, when you meet a famous person, its extraordinary only floats in your ear, but you just refuse to stop your heart honestly, think about what impact these have on yourself, and ask yourself why you haven't achieved such a brilliant life, or why people at the age of seventeen or eighteen are as stagnant as those at the age of seventy or eighty, and are willing to be a mediocre person. So when writing, I couldn't pick out a good example, and finally I got a suitable one. I added a lot of narrators to fill in the words, put a conclusion, put a label on the story, just like a prop, standing alone in the composition, pitifully accepting the review of the marking teacher; Without the author's thought, it can't be integrated with the article and lose the essential meaning of the material.
Therefore, when writing an argumentative essay, we must correctly understand and treat the materials.
First of all, don't make material utility. Both positive and negative are people, things and things that can enlighten people. When accumulating, you should not only pay attention to what topics it is suitable for, but also pay attention to what inspiration it gives you. Because even if you know the terminology of all argumentation methods, you can't grasp the essence of the material, but it's just rhetoric. Secondly, we should dig deep into the content related to the topic in the materials for our own use.
Example 3
Before his death, Master Hongyi repeatedly told his disciples to put his body in a niche, and a bowl was placed under every corner of the niche, which was filled with water to prevent ants and insects from being burned innocently when they climbed onto the corpse.