First, the topic materials

1. A little girl caught a beautiful bird and showed it to her grandmother. Grandma said, "Baby, do you really like it?" "Of course" "Let it be." "Why?" "Because it doesn't like cages, life in cages will kill it." Grandmother said sternly, "You should always remember that if you really like something alive, the first thing you should give it is freedom." 2, a "rich" parents, when their children were punished by the judicial organs, actually took their children to the grand hotel, which was amazing. As a result, the child became more unscrupulous in the future and committed crimes again, and was sentenced to fixed-term imprisonment by the court.

After reading the above materials, you will have many feelings, imaginations and associations. Have you ever experienced a similar or opposite situation in our life? Please write an article on "The Way of Love". Note: ① The materials provided can be used or not, but the content must be within this topic, and you should write your own unique feelings. 2 self-determination. ③ Optional angle. 4 self-made topics. ⑤ Custom style. ⑥ Not less than 800 words. Second, quickly review the questions

Relaxing the examination requirements is a basic orientation of topic composition in the College Entrance Examination (Weibo) in recent years, so how does the marking teacher improve the scores of candidates? If it's a binary relationship, it's based on the depth of your thinking. Take the 2004 Jiangsu College Entrance Examination as an example. The thinking depth of this topic is very high, so the grading standard is adjusted from the students' sample papers after marking, which relaxes the examination requirements for the topic. As long as the article falls into one of the four words "spirit, movement, heaviness and stability", it can't be off topic, even if it doesn't talk about mountains and rivers, it doesn't matter if there is no dialectical relationship. So, what is the grade of the article based on? One kind of volume: all articles that involve the turning point after "however" in materials, have strong speculative meaning, and talk about the dialectical relationship between "change" and "unchangeable", "dynamic" and "static", "one side" and "multifaceted" can reach this level, and the score is above 50 points. Second-class volume: any article that can capture "mountain" and "water" in describing or expounding "calmness and agility" and can talk about one's own feelings, arguments or express unique feelings will get about 46 points. Three types of papers: anyone who can describe or elaborate the appearance of "mountain", "water", "calm" or "flexible" will get 42 points. If it is a monistic concept, it mainly depends on the depth of your thinking about the topic and the uniqueness of your feelings. This topic is the concept of monism. To examine questions quickly, we should first dig and think deeply about "what is true love", "why a little love is not true love" and "how to choose or experience that kind of true love", and write our own unique life experience and rational thinking. We can do this:

(1) Analyze the topic to avoid misunderstanding. There are two concepts of "love" and "way" in the topic of "way of love". By analyzing the status of these two concepts, we can see that this topic focuses on "Tao" related to love, not "love". In this way, if we write this topic as "love" in a shallow sense, it is not appropriate.

(2) Add information to quickly locate. Regarding the topic of "the way of love", we can add it as follows: ① Add "truth" before "love". ② Add "correct" and "inappropriate" before "method". In this way, the theme of the topic can be quickly positioned in the deep meaning of love, such as "What is true love", "What kind of love do you need" and "How to correctly feel that special love". (3) Thinking about the validation of analytical materials. This topic, * * * has two materials and a topic tip. The first material is "To love a bird is not to keep it in a cage, but to set it free". The second material is "he expressed his love for me in his own way (let me do what I like and care about me until late at night), but this is a kind of true love, and I feel it". The last topic tip reminds us that we must focus on "experiencing similar or opposite situations" in life, that is, all kinds of "ways of love"-right or wrong, but we must write our own unique inner feelings about it. (4) Think deeply and refine your understanding. Connecting with the real life situation, do some thinking: What are the ways of "love"? What "ways" of "love" are "true love"? What "ways" of love are not "love" or even "harm"? How do you feel and think about different ways of love? Third, think quickly.

Through in-depth thinking, we can get the following specific understanding:

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(1) Love is a noble emotion of human beings, which can be expressed in many ways. There are many kinds of love in the world, interpersonal love-parent-child love, teacher-student love, male-female love, brother-sister love, friend love; There is love for things-love for power, love for money, love that will keep us alive, love for work, love for career. Moreover, different people may show their love in the same way or in different ways. For example, the vigorous vows of eternal love are love, and the faint mutual affection is also love; The tenderness and thoughtfulness of moistening things is love, and the almost harsh requirements are also love; It is love to think of others from the big picture, and it is also love to pay silent attention from the small; For example, it is love to pursue possession, and it is also love to give up oneself in order to give freedom, and so on. Love is a feeling, which needs to be felt with heart. The first unit of the writing part of the first volume of the Chinese textbook for senior high school is about "feeling life with your heart". In fact, some love in life really needs your heart to feel.

(2) Love, an emotion, can have a great influence, and the influence produced in different ways may be different. For example, if you love a bird, if you take it away and put it in a cage, it may be unbearable, sad, painful and even dead, so taking the bird away is not a love bird, but a pest; Only by giving it freedom, let it jump, sing and fly freely and happily in the flowers, trees and grass under the blue sky and white clouds, that is the true love for birds.

(3) Love must be about ways. When we love a thing, we must look for the right "way of love" that is conducive to its survival and development, and we must avoid doing bad things with good intentions. We should look at things with mature eyes and think with rational thinking. We must never make a series of stupid things under the banner of "love" because of prejudice or prejudice-such as the common misunderstanding of love in family education: doting and pampering (mainly manifested by parents not paying attention to the cultivation of children's self-care, self-confidence, self-improvement, self-esteem and self-love, and meeting their children's requirements too much, doting and pampering). Autocratic stick type (mainly manifested in parents' adherence to the creed of "defeating the enemy without fighting" and "filial son under the stick", frequently abusing their children's "faults" and refusing to give careful guidance, mistakenly thinking that this is a strict requirement), laissez-faire type (mainly manifested in some parents' laissez-faire attitude towards their children based on the principle of "maintaining natural integrity", harming others and benefiting themselves. Therefore, the proper way of love comes from the rational understanding of the meaning of love. Get used to rational thinking in life, study, feeling love and giving love. (4) Love needs to be experienced with heart. We should not only look at all kinds of "love" from around us rationally to avoid misunderstanding, but also carefully feel the "love" from others in different ways, treat real concern and deep love with gratitude, and never treat the goodwill of others as a donkey's liver and lung. Just like "connivance is not love, letting go is not love is not love", some things that don't look like "love" are different kinds of love. When Lin Daiyu entered Jiafu, she repeatedly reminded herself that "step by step, always care". When we experience and feel love, we should do it like Lin Daiyu. Don't take care of others, and don't take care of parents and relatives for granted. Let's treat the love you feel with a grateful heart, and record the dribs and drabs with notes-a warm word for you in winter. In this way, the plain life is extremely beautiful because of love, and you also have a loving heart because of the experience of love, and you pay love in the gratitude of love. Fourth, the misunderstanding of ideas.

(1) There is a misunderstanding about the word "love" in The Way of Love. For example, the article only writes that parents buy food for themselves, take care of themselves, and even lose everything to let themselves go to key middle schools. It does not focus on the deep connotation of "love" in the materials.

(2) There is misunderstanding about the "way" of "the way of love". For example, write about love in general-doctors love patients, parents love children, lovers love, teachers love students and classmates love. For example, writing about love requires paying. As long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a beautiful world. For example, writing about animals also needs love-animals are our close friends, and animals also need love. We don't know that bird lovers only catch birds every day, which makes many birds endangered.

(3) Misunderstanding the truth of "true feelings". For example, I think that writing about the hazy first love of middle school students is to write about the true feelings-because I love her, I dare not express it easily, just watching silently and missing the opportunity. The woman fell in love with another boy, but she still loved her, despite her inner pain.

(4) Misunderstanding the "feeling" of "true feelings". Although the article is about "love", most of it is written in a conceptual and stylized way. For example, writing likes to choose "big events" and lacks the infiltration of one's own inner feelings, which makes the feeling of "love" seem dull and pale, becoming a kind of preaching and lacking the touching power it deserves. Everyone's inner world is unique.

Second, the same expression of love may cause different inner feelings in different people, even in different situations or periods of the same person, so writing feelings must be about individuality and uniqueness. Five, quick ideas

(1) selected style. This topic can be considered as narrative (including prose, stories and short stories, etc.). ) or argumentation. Compared with the two, it seems to me that writing the former can take a little advantage, because it pours its unique emotional experience into the narrative to affect people.

(2) Planning and layout. This paper focuses on the layout of narrative. To write a good narrative, you must arrange the layout of the article. After reviewing the meaning of the question, we should first consider how to enrich the content. It requires us to pay attention to the application of some conception skills: First, the method of turning small into big: the way of love, literally, is also a very empty topic. Although we have made clear the essential direction of the topic through causal analysis and analogy analysis when reviewing the topic, we can't turn it into reality unless we roll with the punches. Therefore, when conceiving, we should concretize the topic into two concrete people with flesh and blood, look for the details of love and the specific feelings of loving and being loved from daily life, and make people and things come alive in our hearts by setting the specific scenes described. We should use frontal description and profile description, fine description and simple pen. -Write about people's unique appearance, distinctive language, vivid manners and behaviors, especially those vivid details. -First, we should pay attention to environmental contrast, atmosphere rendering, others' contrast, discussion, etc. Give readers a concrete and realistic feeling. Second, the instantaneous situation method: narrative can not be generalized. On many occasions, writing one or two instantaneous scenes makes people realize the profound connotation of love. Such an article can be full of twists and turns, interesting, ups and downs and exciting. By using suspense setting, pen ambush, bedding and rendering, first restraining and then promoting, arranging misunderstanding, skillfully using coincidence, sudden turning, contrast, repeated circling, sketch performance, intentional irony, steep waves and then raising waves, we can skillfully express the deep meaning of love and express our unique inner experience.

Sixth, select materials quickly.

(1) Look for materials similar to the topic from the literature. (1) Zhou Youwang war drama governors, it is said that because of the love of praise, as a result, such love makes praise become synonymous with a femme fatale, had to back the eternal blame.

2 "Touching the Dragon and Telling the Queen Zhao" Touching the Dragon felt pity for Shu Qi: "I hope I can make up the number of men in black and defend the palace." "I don't fill the gap, I am willing to trust it." Touching the Dragon evaluates the attitude of Queen Zhao towards her children: "The old minister secretly thinks that the love of the Empress is better than that of Chang 'an Jun." "Parents love their children and have far-reaching influence. After seeing Yan off, I cried at his heel. I mourned his distance and I mourned it. I have done it, but I'm not thinking about it. I will make a wish at the sacrifice. I wish you: don't make mistakes. ? Is it a long time, and children and grandchildren are kings one after another? " (3) "Mozi Plough Column 46": "Mozi is angry with Plough Column. The plow post said:? I'm uncomfortable with others? ? Mozi said:? I will go to the big bank and ride horses and cows. Who should I drive? ? The plow post said:? Can drive a horse. ? Mozi said:? Why do you want to drive a horse? ? The plow post said:? That horse is weird enough. ? Mozi said:? I'm also responsible for my son. ? Mozi was very angry with the farming post. The farming post said, "Don't I have something better than others?" "Mozi asked," If I want to go to Taihang Mountain and use a good horse or a cow to drive the car, which one do you think I will drive? "The tiller replied," Use a good horse, of course. " Mozi asked, "Why do you want a good horse?" The ploughing post said, "Because a good horse can take responsibility." Mozi said, "I also think you have a responsibility. " )

(4) Baodi in A Dream of Red Mansions fell in love and was silent; Duan Yu's love for Wang Yuyan in Jin Yong's "Eight Dragons" is just silly to follow; In Gu Long's Little Eleven Lang, Lian's love is possession or even house arrest. Haier Mao of the Dollhouse keeps saying that he loves Nora, but treats Nora as a doll and doesn't give her any freedom. ⑤ Shu Ting's To the Oak Tree: "If I love you, I will never show off myself with your high branches like Campbell, who is climbing; If I love you-I will never learn from spoony birds and repeat monotonous songs for the shade; It is not only like spring, but also brings cool comfort all year round; It is not just like a dangerous peak, it increases your height and sets off your dignity. Even during the day. Even spring rain. No, these are not enough! I must be a kapok beside you, standing with you as a tree. Shakespeare's King Lear: Before giving the land to his three daughters, King Lear asked them if they loved him. Both the eldest daughter and the second daughter gave satisfactory answers and got the land. The youngest daughter is not good at words because she feels that love can't be expressed in words.