Then ... how should senior two write a composition with clear intention and rigorous structure?
① Material: Two people are walking on the same street. One of them picked up an axe and shouted, "Look what I found!" " ""Don't say' I', "said another." We should say we found it. "After a while, the man who lost the axe came and asked the man with the axe to steal his axe." Oh, "he said to his partner," we are finished this time! ""Don't say' we', "one replied." It's time to say' I'. If a person can't share his income with his friends, he shouldn't expect others to share the risks. "Get to the point: share the wind and rain with the sun, leave some good things for others, and learn to enjoy the material: a nine-official bird learned the language of a scholar and will soon be able to say two or three sentences. Nine official birds are full of ambition, and they talk from morning till night. One day, a cicada was singing happily on a branch. Laugh at the bird at will. Hey, your singing is too harsh. You might as well listen to me talking to people instead of singing. Isn't it beautiful? Hearing this, the cicada said to the nine-official bird, "Although I can't sing well, this is our own song. What you say is very sweet, but it is not your own language, it is someone else's language. Right? "To the point: originality, self-persistence, being the best self, imitation and innovation. ③ Material: There are two brothers, but they are four or five years old. Because the bedroom window is closed all day, they think the room is too dark and envy the bright sunshine outside. The two brothers discussed and said, "We can go outside and sweep the sunshine together. "So, the two brothers took brooms and dustpans and went to the balcony to sweep the sun. When they moved the dustpan into the room, there was no sunshine inside. My mother, who is busy in the kitchen, saw their strange behavior and asked, "What are you doing? They replied, "The room is too dark. We should sweep some sunshine in." Mother smiled: "As long as you open the window, the sun will naturally come in." Why do you have to sweep? "To the point: open your heart, light your heart lamp, the sun grows, and bright flowers bloom in your heart." Material: One summer, drought threatened the lives of all crops in the town. On a hot and dry Sunday, the town priest told the people who came to the church, "Nothing can save us except praying for rain." Now everyone goes home to pray, and when they return to church next weekend, they are ready to thank God for the rain. All the people did as the priest said. When they came to church at the weekend, the priest flew into a rage when he saw them: "We can't go to church today. You don't believe that it will rain today. "Everyone retorted," We all pray to God, and we believe it will rain today! " "Do you believe it? The priest replied, "Then where is the umbrella you brought?" "To the point: always be prepared, bring an umbrella, be sincere and smart, and implement the action materials. Sand is unknown in the world-only sand is the most valuable thing-and gold is among them. To the point: greatness lies in the ordinary, and talent is not exposed. 6 In Nelis Nature Reserve, Alaska, USA, there was a story that lured the wolf into the room. It turns out that people kill local wolves to protect deer, so deer have no natural enemies and eat happily in the forest all day. Ten years later, the number of deer increased from 400 to 40 thousand. However, the deer's posture is stupid and has lost its former beauty. Due to the rapid reproduction and trampling of deer, plants also withered. Deer died in large numbers because of lack of enough food and physical weakness caused by ease and inactivity. So people invited the wolf in again, and the deer ran desperately, and the reserve recovered its old vitality. From the material point of view, the relationship between deer and wolf, and the relationship between deer and its surrounding environment are interdependent. Only when wolves and deer live in harmony can we ensure that they will not lose their nature and maintain the ecological balance of nature. Based on this, we can imagine that ecological balance is a natural law, so is human beings, and the natural law cannot be violated. Judging from the relationship between deer and the surrounding natural living environment, deer has no natural enemies like wolves, and its life is too comfortable and comfortable, so its posture is stupid; Later, with the intervention of the wolf, the deer ran hard to avoid the wolf's predation and finally recovered its vitality. It can be seen that born in sorrow, died in happiness. 7. Read the following text and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. I remember a biological experiment. I put a frog in a cup filled with boiling water, and the frog jumped out immediately. But when I put a frog in another cup with warm water, it was slowly heated to boiling, and the frog would swim comfortably in the cup at first until it found it was too hot to jump out. You need to have a comprehensive understanding of the material, but you can choose a side and an angle to conceive the composition. Independently determine ideas, questions and titles; Don't deviate from the meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it. Tip: put in boiling water-jump out; Warm up slowly-dead. Accordingly, it can be imagined as: born in sorrow, died in happiness. 8. Read the following text and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. Fireflies are carnivorous beetles. Their food is snails. Once a snail encounters any danger, it will retract its head into a hard shell, and many natural enemies can do nothing about it. How do weak and clumsy fireflies deal with it? There are a pair of jaws on the top of fireflies' heads, which are as thin as hair and extremely sharp. When fireflies catch snails, they pat them gently with their jaws first, but snails don't care about fireflies at all, and even feel as comfortable as massage after being knocked a few times. To shoot a firefly is to inject it with venom. Snails are paralyzed without warning until they lose consciousness. When a snail is poisoned, fireflies inject another liquid to make the meat of the snail become liquid, and then drink it with a tubular mouth. You need to have a comprehensive understanding of the material, but you can choose a side and an angle to conceive the composition. Independently determine ideas, questions and titles; Don't deviate from the meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it. Tip: from the snail's point of view: coveting ease and enjoyment will bear bitter fruit; The more seemingly vulnerable the opponent, the more you can't take it lightly. From the firefly's point of view: some shortcomings are sometimes just the weapons of success. Example 9, The Shoemaker's Curiosity Swallow is a migratory bird. At first, people didn't think so. Swallows spend the winter under the ice in the pond in winter? -This is the conclusion reached by Aristotle, a great man in ancient Greece. It is natural that people have worshipped it for more than 2400 years. /kloc-in the 8th century, a shoemaker in Basel, Switzerland saw swallows nesting under the shed, and his curiosity drove him to write a note? -"Swallow, where do you spend the winter? "Tie it to the swallow's leg. The next spring, when the swallow came home, the shoemaker accidentally found a new note: "Athens, spend the winter at Antoine's house." "The shoemaker's curiosity finally clarified a fallacy that has been believed for more than 2,400 years. It is easy for students to find out the word "curious" which embodies the main idea of this material. The word "Curiosity makes him write a note" is used three times in the material, "Shoemaker's curiosity makes a fallacy that has been believed for more than 2400 years …" Plus the title of the material "Shoemaker's Curiosity", students who grasp the key words can easily understand the main idea of this material: Curiosity is often the driving force for invention and innovation. There is a legend that there is a bird that sings only once in its life, and its song is more beautiful than all the creatures in the world. From the moment he left the nest, he was looking for the thorn tree and wouldn't stop until he reached his goal. Then, it plunged into the longest and sharpest thorns and let go of the sound among the wild branches. At the dying moment, it transcended its own pain, and its singing actually eclipsed larks and nightingales. This is a beautiful song that ends with death. However, the whole world is listening quietly, and God is smiling in the sky. Because the most beautiful thing can only be exchanged for its singing with the deepest pain. It is a singing at the cost of life, and it is the most beautiful swan song in the world. This is not only an attitude towards life, but also an earth-shaking way of love. Then choose the most suitable idea to write: the main purpose of the above materials is to praise the thorn bird for singing the most beautiful song of life with tenacious spirit. From the legend of birds, we can imagine as follows: ① flower of life is beautiful only when it is free from its own pain; (2) Only with tenacious will can we dare to challenge the thorns in life; Life needs courage and tenacity. From the discussion of the materials, we can draw the following conclusions: ① The best things need to be exchanged with the deepest pain; (2) at the expense of life to open a beautiful flower of life, is also a kind of love for life. Accurately understand the meaning of the material, and determine the intention of the composition according to your own knowledge reserve, life experience and ideological understanding, so as to conceive the composition. Example 1 1. There was a fisherman in ancient times. One day, he caught two big carp in a well net. The next day, three crucian carp were caught in the well; On the third day, only a few rice shrimps were caught; The fourth day, the fifth day ... nothing was caught. Why? Lu Xun was frightened by the result. The space is not wide, the waters are narrow, and there are not many hidden fish. Fishing in the well (reason) Two big carp, three crucian carp, several rice shrimps, blank (result) Through the analysis of "Why is this", we can quickly understand the main idea of the material: only by casting a net in a vast space can we reap rich harvest. Example 12. Read the following text and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. An English climber fell down on the way to Mount Everest because of extreme lack of oxygen. Climbers still have a long way to go to climb to the top of the mountain. Dozens of climbers passed by him, unwilling to delay their climb. A few hours later, the 34-year-old climber died. After the news spread, some people were shocked and said that only the most experienced climbers could climb high before. Whether they know it or not, unless it endangers the lives of rescuers, dying climbers will not be abandoned without help. However, some people say that people, whether people or climbers, should understand that people always die. Everyone has their own tasks and pressures, otherwise people will think that they are spending money to visit the park. Understand the material comprehensively, but you can conceive the composition from one side and one angle. Independently determine the concept, style and title; Don't deviate from the content or meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it. It is the problem to comment on the material from different angles. The extracted questions are different opinions caused by the incident, such as "can't be saved". Example 13. Read the following materials and write as required. The material 1 (1) has no credit and hard work. As long as you work hard, you will get something. (2) Without income, efforts in the wrong direction are just futile. Only by doing things in one way can we get twice the result with half the effort. Material 2: (1) The more you know, the easier it is to find a job; (2) There are many people competing for a good job, and those who are proficient in learning will get it. Material 3: (1) Don't dream, because it's impossible; (2) Dreams must be pursued, and there will be gains after hard work. The above three groups of materials have two different views. Please make up your mind, choose your own style, draw up your own title and write an article of no less than 800 words. What you write must be within the scope of the topic. In life, many people will only use a single way of thinking, either enthusiastic or resolute, blindly optimistic when things go wrong; Either disheartened, negative and decadent, pessimistic and desperate, and lose confidence in life. Both extreme ways of thinking will bring harm to life. We should think about everything from both positive and negative directions and look at the problem comprehensively and dialectically in order to have a clearer understanding. In writing, we can analyze the harmfulness of single thinking mode, reflect the superiority of two-way thinking mode, observe life, make comments, record stories, tell stories and talk about our experiences. Write an argumentative essay to discuss the importance of thinking method to life, and what kind of thinking method is there. People are often used to inertial thinking. In fact, from another angle, the world will change and life will be different, thus proving that flexible thinking is the creator of the earth. Example 14. Read the following text and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. A philosophy professor came to the zoo to teach philosophy to animals. The philosophy professor talked about many empty theories, and then said, "Everything should start from the foundation, just like any building should start from the bottom.". A frog asked the professor impatiently, "excuse me, professor, do all buildings really have to start from the ground floor?" The philosophy professor glanced at the frog and said, "Of course! Frog in the well! The frog retorted, "Because it's a frog at the bottom of a well, I asked you-did you start at the bottom of the well when you dug it?" "The philosophy professor was speechless. Animals have said, "Yes, even frogs in the well have their own unique opinions, let alone not? "? !" You need to have a comprehensive understanding of the material, but you can choose a side and an angle to conceive the composition. Independently determine the concept, style and title; Don't deviate from the meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it. From the overall material, it embodies the objective and comprehensive dichotomy philosophy, and can extract the topics of "how to look at things" and "to see the strengths of others"; The philosophy of theory and practice, objectivity and subjectivity is embodied in the professor's words and deeds, and the topics of "words and deeds" and "theory should be combined with practice" can be refined; From the frog's words and deeds, it embodies relative and absolute, * * * and special philosophy, which can extract the topic of "dare to question" and "dare to challenge"; From the comments of other animals, we can extract topics such as "everyone has his own strengths". 15, the method of connecting with reality-some thoughts, opinions and behaviors in real life are often reflected in some forms such as data, metaphors, fables and cartoons, which requires us to be good at connecting with our real life and excavating its significance. The train of thought is often based on things and people (society). 1, ① (leech) sucks your blood many times, and it kisses you warmly. (2) (cigarettes) are always affectionate, and how much health is kissed from your mouth. When leeches and cigarettes are associated with human society, it is easy for students to think of the idiom "honey in mouth and sword in belly", and the main idea of this combination material is easy to grasp. "duplicity". Example 16. Write an article according to the following materials. Style is not limited, except poetry. Not less than 800 words. The philosopher gave his disciples a last lesson on the grass and asked, "How to get rid of these weeds?" Disciple A said, "Shovel with a shovel." B said, "Burn." C said, "Sprinkle lime." Ding Dao: "uproot." The philosopher said, "Try them all. If you don't change it, come back here a year later. " A year later, it's all here, the future of philosophers. But his disciples saw lush crops everywhere and no weeds, and finally realized a truth: if there are no weeds, we must plant crops. The material should be "no grass" but "crops", which is a profound metaphor. Grass refers to the falsehood and ugliness in life, while crops refer to the truth, goodness and beauty. When examining such topics, we should pay attention to turning abstract into concrete, so that our thinking will be broadened. If you want a person not to be greedy, you must occupy his heart with conscience; If you want to make a person without vanity, you must occupy his heart with sincerity; If you want a person not to resent, you must occupy his heart with tolerance; To make a person no longer numb, he must occupy his mind with sobriety; If you want a person to stop being indifferent, you should fill your heart with love and so on. The key is to grasp the big net of life and see the big from the small. ◆ Summary and review: For materials, we must first grasp them as a whole. The materials provided by the material composition are the basis of writing and contain the main idea of the article. The author must grasp the center of the material. This is the soul of your article. Simply put, the main idea of the material is the argument of the argumentative paper you want to write and the central idea of the narrative you write. First, according to the key words in the material, from the perspectives of affirmation, negation and dialectical view, a clear conclusion is analyzed and summarized. If the key words are not obvious, you can also infer the theme through causality and dialectical relationship, and finally connect with reality. When reviewing the questions, we should also grasp the author's emotions in the materials, whether it is praise or disapproval. Idea: 1. Horizontal conception means that in the process of thinking, thinking follows the direction that raw materials tell readers. For example, we can think in this direction and think about the influence of external factors on people. 2. Hypothetical reasoning (reverse conception) is to make reasonable assumptions (positive and negative) about raw materials on the basis of knowing the contents of raw materials, and make appropriate reasoning and extension. For example, "If you are near Zhu Zhechi, you will be black if you are near Mexico." We can think that "those who are near Mexico are not necessarily black." 3. The idea of analogy is to connect the known content of the material with other content besides the material (preferably the current reality) and find out the similarities through association. Material 3: This is a Zen story. Once upon a time, there was a young man who was eager to practice superb swordsmanship, so he came all the way to a fairy mountain and asked the outside experts for advice. The boy is bent on becoming famous as soon as possible. After bowing, he said, "I am determined to study hard and practice hard." How long will it take the master to learn to go down the mountain? " The master replied, "Ten years." The teenager thought it was too long, so he said, "If I go all out and travel day and night, how long will it take?" Master said, "It will take about thirty years." The teenager was shocked: "Why does it take thirty years to go all out?" The host didn't answer. The boy added: "I must practice hard at all costs and strive for early success." Master said, "Then, you must learn from me for at least seventy years." The boy pondered for a long time and finally realized. Whether there is a similar phenomenon in connection with reality can only be found everywhere. For example, in reality, many parents try their best to turn their children into geniuses, eager for quick success and quick success, and want to get ahead in one step. The result can be imagined. 4. The viewpoint of dialectical material composition can best reflect the ability of candidates to think. Seeing the problem dialectically and making correct thinking can best reflect the depth of the article. Material 4: An ant failed to climb the wall six times, but it still climbed a long way. One man said, "What a respectable little ant." The second man said, "What a stupid ant." The third man said, "What a poor little ant." what do you think? Please write an argumentative essay according to the materials. This article can be written as "Perseverance" and "Change the Way", but "Flexibility and Persistence" is more innovative. "I think it's an armchair strategist. I don't know if it should be done." Only by constant practice can we judge the problem well and have good intentions.